i sit between the walls as the room for mistakes lessens
the pressure is molding me into an improvement
i breathe, i aim to do more
maybe i’ll have sunflowers in my speech
let my actions be healing
audit my personality
remind myself sometimes your own thoughts overwhelm
self imposed worries and pressure can drown
you have to allow others to float comfortably
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This poem is very emotionally impactful, especially the second stanza “. . .let my actions be healing. . .” The reader can feel that the narrator is making a positive change.
Thank you, Jenny! I wrote this poem after my actions had nearly ended a relationship that I was in. That person and I are much closer now than we were then. So I guess I did make some positive changes 🙂
Thank you for your comment!
You’re very welcome. I really enjoy reading your poetry.
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